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 <p>Dear {{first_name}} {{last_name}},</p>
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-<p>It is my pleasure to welcome you as a fully signed up user of the OneLab experimental facility. OneLab provides you with access to world class computer networking testbeds, such as IoT-LAB, NITOS, and PlanetLab Europe. Our aim at OneLab is to promote the use of these testbeds for pre-commercial research and development by industry, for scientific research, and for university level laboratory exercises.</p>
+<p>It is my pleasure to welcome you as a fully signed-up user of the OneLab experimental facility. OneLab provides you with access to world class computer networking testbeds, such as IoT-LAB, NITOS, and PlanetLab Europe. Our aim at OneLab is to promote the use of these testbeds for pre-commercial research and development by industry, for scientific research, and for university level laboratory exercises.</p>
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-Your entry point for access to the testbeds is the OneLab portal, which provides a web-based interface for browsing and reserving resources on the various testbeds. To run an experiment using those resources, you may log in to the testbed and/or individual nodes on the testbed with your OneLab public/private key pair, or use an experiment control tool such as as NEPI or OMF. The OneLab operations team is standing by at support@onelab.eu to provide you with help regarding the portal and to refer your testbed- and tool-specific queries to those best able to answer them.
+Your entry point for access to the testbeds is the OneLab portal, which provides a web-based interface for browsing and reserving resources on the various testbeds. To run an experiment using those resources, you may log in to the testbed and/or individual nodes on the testbed with your OneLab public/private key pair, or you may use an experiment control tool such as as NEPI or OMF. The OneLab operations team is standing by at support@onelab.eu to provide you with help regarding the portal and to refer your testbed- and tool-specific queries to those best able to answer them.
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-</p>On behalf of the entire team, I wish you a fruitful user experience on OneLab.</p>
+</p>On behalf of the entire team, I wish you a fruitful user experience with the OneLab portal.</p>
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 <p>Yours sincerely,</p>
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